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中考英语作文写作步骤与评分分析

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一作文写作步骤

1. 写作前

不可急于动笔,要先审题,列出要点,写出提纲。接下来,脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。

至于时态,要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的,与生活贴近的文章,用以参考。

2. 写作中

动笔前要有清晰的轮廓,即上述的要点、体裁、时态,并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时,最好不要直接写在试卷上,以免修改时涂改太多。在时间充足的前提下,先写在草稿纸上为宜。

写作中应注意三大问题:文章所要求的格式,逻辑顺序和遣词造句。我们主要研究下格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。

1常见格式

① 信件的格式:

Dear Betty。

Thank you for your last letter. Here are…

Love。

② 电子的格式:

Subject:My dog From:Thomas\&Nancy。

Good news!I have a new pet…

Thomas

③ 日记的格式:

Friday,April 10th Fine

Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…

2写作中的遣词造句

① 使用熟悉的、已掌握的词汇和句型;少用难拼写的词及复合句(亮点句需用自己熟记的掌握的)

② 学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。

③ 使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。如:

文章及段落起始的用语:to begin with,first of all

表示先后次序的词:first,second,then,next,finally

表示因果关系的词:so,because,as

表示并列关系的词:and,or

表示转折关系的词:but,however

表示举例的词:for example,such as,onthe one hand,on the other hand

表示总结性的词:in fact,in a word,ingeneral

④ 多用固定词组,为文章增色。

⑤ 直接用英语表达,避免用汉语思维。

⑥ 简单发挥,不能脱离中心。

⑦ 符合字数要求。

3. 写作后

在草稿纸上完成文章后,不要立即誊写在试卷上,以下几步也极其重要。

① 再次查看题目要求,看有无遗漏。

② 看语言是否通顺,语法是否正确。包括大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致及词语搭配等。

③ 查看字数是否符合要求。通常要求为100字左右。

④ 认真书写于试卷上。字迹规范、美观,卷面整洁。

二把握评判尺度以满分为15分为例,可参看以下五个档次的评分细则

一级(13-15分)

2. 句子正确通顺,或只有个别小错。

3. 单词拼写错误不超过4个。

二级(10-12分)

2. 句子基本正确。表达错误较少,表达较通顺。

3. 单词拼写错误不超过6个。

7-9分

2. 句子表达错误较多,但尚可读懂。

3. 单词拼写错误不超过10个。

四级(4-6分)

2. 只有少数句子表达正确。

3. 拼写错误在10个以上。

五级(3分以下)

只有个别词语可读,但通篇不知所云。

二、例文欣赏

1.【写作要求】

现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”

内容包括:

1.地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。

2.你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。

作文要求:

2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。

My Low--carbonLife

The environmentalpollution is worse and worse today.

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My Low-carbon Life

The environmentalpollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and airare polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy andreduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walkto school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lightsand fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paperand other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students tojoin me and make the earth more and more beautiful.

2.【写作要求】

每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我…”请你以Friends为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,可以围绕主题适当展开,阐述交友的重要性和好处。

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Friends

What are friends? Weoften talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people whocan help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you tolisten to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends.Someone also says, “You can’twalk any step without a friend.” So I think friends arevery important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.

3.【写作要求】

最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。

原因

赞成

帮助他人是美德。

帮助他人就是帮助自己。

反对

怕陷入麻烦。

怕被误解。

你的观点?至少两点

要求:1表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。

2必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥。

3词数:100左右征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数

4不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

参考词汇:美德virtue

Should We HelpStrangers?

Recently our class hada discussion about whether we should help strangers.Differentstudents have different opinions.

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Should We HelpStrangers?

Recently our class hada discussion about whether we should help strangers.Differentstudents have different opinions.

Some think we shouldtry to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.Wemay come across some trouble and need others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangersto them,its hard to imagine what our world will belike.

However,someare afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost ofkindness.

In my opinion,weshould try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,ourworld will be full of love.

4.【写作要求】

某英语报开展“How to Deal with OurStudy Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:

1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松。

2. 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”

3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡,试着安排好自己的空余时间。

4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习,我们会取得大的进步。

5. 有问题时,我们…

要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯。

2. 词数90个左右。

3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2句话补充完整。

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How to Deal with OurStudy Problems

Although we often feelstressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.

We can wear calmcolours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be carefulenough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should alsoachieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare timewell. Dont lose heart at any time. You will make greatprogress through hard work.

When having problems,we can ask people around us for help. Its not wise to keep our worriesto ourselves.

5.【写作要求】

学校英语社团在举办征文比赛,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇题为“ThePerson Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下:

1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈,她四十几岁。

2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题,并建议我如何解决它们。

3. 作为一名医生,她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班,把她的大部分时

间都奉献给了工作。

4. 所以,我认为她不仅是位好妈妈,也是名好医生。

5. 我希望 …

要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯。

2. 词数90个左右。

3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话补充完整。

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The Person Who HasInfluenced Me Most

My mother is the personwho has influenced me most.

She is in her forties.She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solvethem. As a doctor, she often says she cant be too careful. She oftenworks extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think sheis not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

I hope I can be aperson like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. Shedbetter have more time to relax herself.

6.【写作要求】

假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上,以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题,为某中学生英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:

1. 目的:为贫困地区的孩子们筹款

2. 10月23日,星期六

3. 路径:学校—市中心

4. 简况:学生把自己分成四人一组,出发前计划好了一切,步行很艰辛,但活动过程中大家互相帮助,互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下,筹得善款5万多元。

5. 感受:每个人都很累,但都很高兴,因为…

注意:1. 报道须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

3. 词数80个左右。

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Walk for children inpoor areas

Not long ago, ourschool organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.

It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before thewalk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. Itwas a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped eachother. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan inthe end.

We all felt tired, butwe were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was anexcellent chance to learn team spirit.

7.【写作要求】

“保护环境,人人有责”你想成为一名绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧!其实,环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题,写一篇短文。

注意:

1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

2.短文词数90左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:draw, both sides of paper,plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort

How to Be a GreenerPerson?

Its ourduty to protect our environment around us.

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How to be a greener person

Its ourduty to protect the inviyonment around us.

When we go to school,we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’tstep on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we goshopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home we cansave water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts.At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cansand plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music orspit in pulic.

Lets dosomething to protect our environment.

8.【写作要求】

“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄?”做出业绩的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄…

一.Dr Norman Bethune

1.Natlonality(国籍) Canada

3.Mainstories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medicaltools

二.Liu Xiang

3.Mainstories: won the first

4.Olympicgold medal in the men s 110m hurdles in Athens; set a world record inthe same in Lausanne

从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄,以The Hero in MyHeart为题写一篇短文。

要求:①包含所选信息卡上的内容;②适当拓展,如学英雄的感想、行动等;③不能出现表明你身份的信息;④词数80左右,不含已给出部分。

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most peoplehave heroes in their hearts. Forme。

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The Hero in My Heart

As we know, mostpeople have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in myheart. He was a great doctor from Canada.

Dr Bethune was good atperforming operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, hecame to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked sohard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didnt stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

I am deeply moved byhis stories. So Ill work hard today and do my best to help others.

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The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most peoplehave heroes in their hearts. For me, Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. Heis a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good atrunning. In 2004, he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men,s 110m hurdles in Athens. Then, he set a world record in thesame in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, LiuXiang also likes singing and he sings well.

With his hard work, heis winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder fromnow on.

9.【写作要求】

请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题, 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文, 注意适当表达自己的看法。

1. Who is the writer ofthe great book?

2. What is the mainidea of the book?

3. Who are theimportant characters?

4. Whats thetheme of the story?

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My Favourite Great Book

My favourite great bookis The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.

Tom Sawyer is a livelyand clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, sohe runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends,Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lostin a cave. And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of thestory, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fairhair. Huck is Toms best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of thestory.

The theme of the storyis to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.

10.【写作要求】

某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How tokeep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:

1. 父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题。

2. 你对这些问题的看法。

3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

How to keep a goodrelationship with parents

In my opinion, I havetoo many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out

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How to keep a goodrelationship with parents

In my opinion, I havetoo many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends atnight. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too muchattention to my exam results. I think my parents don’tquite understand me.

However, I try my bestto understand them. Although they dont allow me to make my owndecisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they reallylove me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a goodrelationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them asfriends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.

11.【写作要求】

Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后,她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示,写一篇英语短文。

In the past

Now

Personalities

shy, quiet, get nervouseasily

brave, outgoing…

Hobbies

reading

reading, singing…

Abilities

good at dancing,singing…

要求:

1. 覆盖要点,可以合理增加细节。

2. 80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

Joining a clubsometimes changes a person greatly.

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Joining a clubsometimes changes a person greatly.

Mary used to be a shyand quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned redwhen she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her freetime. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Maryis so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out inpublic anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies,such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.

People sure change allthe time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves andchoose to be the best of ourselves.

12.【写作要求】

以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文,谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活,并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求:内容完整,意思连贯,符合逻辑,表达正确。

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My Weekend Housework

On last Saturdaymorning I got up at about seven o’clock. After breakfast, I went to thestore and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I thinkit’s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’tlike do any washing. In the afternoon I cleaned the yard. After that I foldedmy clothes and made my bed.

13.【写作要求】

实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于表达,更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好,不计入总词数。

2.短文需包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。

3.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。

Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon,everyone!

Today Idlike to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you.

Thank you for yourlistening!

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Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon,everyone!

Today Idlike to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you.

Good listening canalways show respect and build good relationships with people.

Parents should listento their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other.Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase theirunderstanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates,then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.

We’dbetter be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keepsilent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closerto each other.

Thank you for your listening!

14.【写作要求】

为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)

注意:1内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥

2表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3词数80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:be careful, on line,danger, call...for, go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we shouldalways keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of mysuggestions.

First。

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How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we shouldalways keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of mysuggestions.

First, we should becareful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will doharm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must rememberits dangerous to swim in the river.

In short, safety mustcome first !

15.【写作要求】

内容包括:

3. 号召大家都读书。

作文要求:

2. 语句连贯,词数80词左右。

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Reading---A good Habit

Reading is a very goodhabit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a goodreading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge butalso make us to think over more different things efficiently.

Besides, we can do somereading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of myfavorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I likemost are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I oftenbuy my favorite books on line for its big discount.

Finally, I like toshare my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading canbenefits us a lot, its time for us to have our good reading habit now!

16.【写作要求】

假设你叫李华,你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in aHealthy Way”为题的演讲比赛,请你准备写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:

1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)

2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些,并说明原因。

3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯,并举例说明。

4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。

作文要求:

2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。

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How to Eat in a Healthy Way

Hello, everybody. ImLi Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.

Firstly, we shouldnever eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good forhealth.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make usbecome much healthier.

My eating habits aregood.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs,vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.

I hope everyone can eatin a healthy way.

17.【写作要求】

作家雨果说过:“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把,一是字母,二是数字,三是音符。”从这句话中,我们足可见音乐对人的发展的影响。请你根据以下提示,以Music为题,写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。

提示:1. 音乐使人充满活力,让人快乐。

2. 没有音乐,生活就没有乐趣。

3. 你最喜欢的音乐是......

4. 你不能忍受的音乐是......

要求:1. 80词左右。

2. 恰当运用定语从句。

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Music

I like music very much.It gives me energy when Im tired and it makes me happy when Im sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music,our life wont be so interesting. Different people likedifferent kinds of music. I like electronic music thatsloud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kidsis my favorite band. I cant stand music that is quietand slow. It makes me sleepy.

18.【写作要求】

为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅,你校学生会正在举办以“Howto behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文。以上背景内容无需表述

短文要点如下:

1.学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话。

2.礼貌待人,热心助人。

3.遵守交通规则;不在公共场所喧哗;不乱扔垃圾。

4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。

要求:1.不要逐词翻译。

2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。

3.词数60~80。短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。

How to behave well

Behaving well is thesecret of getting on well with others.

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How to behave well

Behaving well is thesecret of getting on well with others.

As a student,Ithink its very important to do everything on time andkeep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite toothers and ready to help people in need. Wed betternot talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about.And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally,learnto work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.

19.【写作要求】

请根据以下提示信息以My favourite moviestar为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,可适当发挥。

提示信息:

☆ Who is your favourite moviestar?

☆ What does he or she look like?

☆ What do you think is his orher best movie?

☆ Why do you like him or her?

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My favourite movie star

My favourite movie staris Jackie Chan. He has won many prizes. He is famous not only in China, butalso in other countries.

Jackie Chan is not verytall. He has black hair and a big nose. His eyes are not big, but bright. Healways smiles, especially after he beats bad men. Most of his movies areexciting. I think his best movie is Police Story. He often gives money to helppoor people, so I like him very much.

20.【写作要求】

天下最伟大的爱就是母爱。假设你是李静,母亲节就要到了,你们班将举办以What will you do for Mum?为题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。

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What will you do forMum

Hello, class. I’m LiJing. Mother’s Day is coming.

Imgoing to do something for my mum on that day.

My mum likes flowers,so I’ll buy some beautiful ones for her. I’llcook a delicious dinner after school. Our family will get together and havedinner happily. Also, I’ll send my mum a card and say “Happy Mother’s Day”to her.

I love my mum very muchand Ill study hard to make her proud of me one day.

Thanks for yourattention.

21.【写作要求】

亲爱的同学们,课余时间、周末、假期,你们通常都是怎样度过的呢?请以“My Free Time”为题,写一篇短文。

信息提示:1. 参加运动,强身健体;2. 娱乐活动,放松心情;3. 做家务,帮助父母。

要点:1. 根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。

2. 文中不得出现真实人名或校名。

3. 词数为80-100。文章的开头已给出,但不计人总词数。

My Free Time

I have lots of thingsto do in my free time. _____________

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My Free Time

I have lots of thingsto do in my free time.

Usually I take exerciseafter school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen tothe music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I helpmy parents with the housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I wouldlike to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction,or even a poem. Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger forknowledge.

I love my free timebecause I enjoy the freedom.

22.【写作要求】

每一个人,每一个国家,都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生,你是如何理解中国梦的?你的中国梦是什么呢?为实现你的梦想,你将怎么做呢?假设你叫李红(Li Hong)请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。

要求: 1. 条理清楚,有表明自己观点的句子。

2. 书写工整,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。

3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容,可适当发挥,但不能出现真实的人名、地名。

4. 参考词汇:Chinadream,come true ,achieve onesdreams., give up, hold on to, make up of

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My Dream

Everyone has hisdreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are ourChina dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s LiHong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on,I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When Imeet any difficulty, I won’t give it up , I must get itover .

I’msure it’s very important to dream,. Some dreams aremore realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should holdon to them, they can just come true one day.

23.【写作要求】

当今社会,与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力,作为中学生,学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论,请根据以下的讨论结果,以“How to get on well with others?”为题,写一篇英语短文。

讨论结果

1尊重respect他人

2学会沟通

3乐于助人

我的建议

注意:1词数80左右。

2可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。

3文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。

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How to get on well with others

As we all know,students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?

First of all, we shouldrespect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we shouldunderstand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with eachother and share our happiness and sadness. Whats more, we should be kind toothers and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.

In my opinion, weshould treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along wellwith each other and feel happy.

24.【写作要求】

在不同的地方有不同的风俗习惯,饮食文化很重要。中国的饮食文化不同于西方。请你谈谈中国的三餐,以“when you in China, do as the Chinese do!” 为题写一篇短文。

要求:80词左右,内容合理;要点齐全;句子及篇章结构准确、连贯;书写规范。

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When in China, do as the Chinese do

Meals in China aredifferent in some ways from meals in the West.

In China, lunch isusually served around 12 oclock.As fordinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West.Chopsticks are used to eat most food.Generally,for dinner, therell be lots of different dishes, notjust three courses.Besides, Chinese people like to talkabout food, so its a good topic during a meal.

The golden rule is:when youre in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!

25.【写作要求】

养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯,对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文,发表在学校网站上。

提示要点:

一良好的生活和学习习惯包括:

1在生活方面:①健康饮食 ②经常锻炼 ③利用好时间

2在学习方面:①课前预习 ②认真听讲 ③独立作业

二良好习惯带来的益处包括

1帮助我们更好的学习知识

2使我们提高技能,学会自我控制。

三 谈谈你的感受

作文要求:

1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2、词数90左右,开关已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A Good Habit, aSuccessful School Life

A habit is somethingthat you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially somethingthat is hard to stop doing.

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A Good Habit, aSuccessful School Life

A habit is somethingthat you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially somethingthat is hard to stop doing.

In our daily life, weought to keep a healthy diet.Also, it’snecessary for us to exercise a lot.And we should learnto make good use of our time.In our school life, weshould prepare well for each lesson.In class, we mustlisten to the teacher carefully.Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.

In a word, good habitscan help us learn things better and improve our skills.Wecan learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.

I think good habits arereally good for our mind and body.

26.【写作要求】

要求:

1.要点齐全,并适当发挥。

2.词数:80词左右(开头已给出、不计人总词数)

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Sharing

Itsvery important to learn to share with each other.

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Sharing

Itsvery important to learn to share with each other.

I have many things toshare in different ways.For example,Ican share some beautiful pictures,favorite music,different ideas with others face to face or by .e-mail which are widely used. Now Id liketo share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.

Emily was lonely andunhappy.I hoped to cheer her up.So I shared myfavorite books and chatted with her after class.As timewent by,she became used to sharing her feelings with me.Now were good friends.

In a word,sharingis not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.

27.【写作要求】

要求:1、字迹工整,规范。

2、 80词左右。

3、根据所给要点及参考词汇,可适当发挥。

①春节是中国农历年(the lunar year)的第一天。

②春节前:一个月前开始准备(prepare)食物,打扫卫生,装饰(decorate)房子。

③除夕(On Chinese New Years Eve)家人团员(get together) 吃年夜饭(big dinner)守夜(stay up till midnight) 放烟花鞭炮(play fireworks and crackers)

④大年初一(the first day)穿新衣(put on new clothes)向父母拜年(greet parents)收压岁钱(get lucky money)

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The Spring Festival

In China, the Springfestival is the first day of the lunar year. People usually start preparing forthe festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and cleanand decorate their homes. On Chinese New Years Eve, the family all gettogether for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworksand crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, childrenput on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to getlucky money from them.

28.【写作要求】

1. 使用iPad对学习的好处。

2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响。

3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。

注意:开头已经给出,不计入总数。词数100字左右。

Is iPad Good or Bad forMiddle School Students?

I’m ajunior middle school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads andthey think it’s a fashion to use them.

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Is iPad good or bad formiddle school students

Im ajunior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and theythink its a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we canlisten to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on thescreen. Apparently, its helpful to our study,especially to our English listening.

Some students, however,bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, whichmakes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even wasteprecious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, asstudents, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success.The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration isawfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should makea rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.

29.【写作要求】

三年的初中生活即将结束,在考场中的你,一定会思绪万千。三年来,你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩,这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励,还有…现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you,my...”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求如下:1. 短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等。

2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

3. 词数80左右。

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Thank you,My Englishteacher

I should say “thankyou”to my English teacher.

Hes atall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football andbasketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes hisclasses lively and interesting. Hes kind but strictwith us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no usememorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improvedwith his help.I think he is the best in my mind.

I will remember himforever.

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Thank You,My Mother

Wherever we are today,whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much,so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother.

I think my mother isone of the best mothers in the world. She is the busiest one in my family. Shedoes chores for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot.She does lots of things for me,but she never wants anything in return.

How will I show mythanks to my mother? First,this year,I am going to give her a surprise birthdayparty and buy her a special present. Second,Ill do well in school. Third,Ill help her do housework when Im free. Iwant to make her happy.

In a word,I love mymother.

30.【写作要求】

假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动,请你根据下表所提示的要点,以Computer in my life为题,用英语为该报写一篇短文,简述计算机在你生活中的用途,并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。

用途

学习

交流

传递信息;探讨问题

生活

欣赏音乐;购买商品

其他

请考生自拟一点内容

感受

计算机对你生活的影响(请考生自拟一点内容)

1.表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2.词数100左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Computer in my life

The computer has becomean important part of my life.

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Computer in my life

The computer has becomean important part of my life.

Usually I use thecomputer to search for information and do some further reading. With the helpof computer,I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not onlycommunicate with my teachers and classmates by discuss questions with them online. Whats more,I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes mylife much easier. Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed.Moreover,I can take part in some kinds of activitiesonline.

In a word,thecomputer is really of great help to me. It brings me a more meaningful andcolourful life.

整理于网络英语资源,仅作教学研究只用,如有侵权删除

在词汇教学中,知识、技能与智力三者之间的关系其实如我们学开车一样,第一步是学习交通法规,即学习词汇、句型、语法等基础知识。

第二步是上路练车直到熟练驾驶,即通过练习掌握词汇、句型、语法的用法,具备听说读写的基本技能。

第三步是能应对各种天气、路况、车型,最终实现驾驶自如,即有了灵活运用英语知识和技能的智力,从而达到熟练输出语言的目的。具体如下图所示:

本文相关词条概念解析:

范文

范文,人名。1967年2月生于内蒙古武川县,中共党员,工学博士,博士研究生导师,长安大学副校长。

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